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My Book of Birds 1.0.0

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An Animated book, inspired by Barry Beckham. Thanks Barry




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Bert

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Great images and I really liked the way you had made the transitions as book pages.  The only thing I found distracting was the visible line in the spread out pages of the book.  DaveG has made a bookstyle  where you don't see the line in the spread out.   I liked the music and bird sounds also very much and you bird images are superb.

Thanks for posting.

Response from the author:

Thank you for your comments Bert, pleased you liked the sequence.

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Jim R

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Absolutely wonderful bird images. Captured from a boardwalk for the most part I assume.  

I appreciate the work that went into producing the AV, but speaking only for myself, it didn't click with me.

I think you used the AV transition technically very well. But aesthetically, I am sorry, it did not catch my attention. I found it distracting. The constant timing, and having to wait for the bird(s) to straighten out put me off. The bird images themselves kept me there.

I have seen this page flipping approach used several times and I think it can work better when there is one image per page and with a border around it. The full two page spread, for me, didn't work for these pictures. Perhaps a few full two page spreads used throughout the show with the others being single picture/page might have been OK for me. (But then the images wouldn't have been as large and not as impressive.)

Maybe I am "old school" but if you had used simple fade transitions, slightly stronger music and variation in screen times and transition timing I might have offered a standing ovation.

Remember the above are just one person's thoughts, the person you need to satisfy is yourself. I don't always agree with feedback. 

Response from the author:

Thank you Jim R for your feedback, I'm pleased you liked the images if not the presentation. Many of the images were taken from hides at various places in the south east. I may try to do a sequence in my usual style at a later date. Thank you for your honest appraisal.

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